Twice Bitten 18

This entry is part 13 of 13 in the series Twice bitten



I removed myself from his arms to give myself some distance from him and stared into his face. “That remains to be seen, Daniel. Remember, I’ve been through this before and it is easy to make promises, but it’s not so easy to keep them.”

Although, I believed him in my heart, my head still needed a lot of convincing. The saying ‘once bitten, twice shy’ is very apt. I’ve been bitten by the love bug twice, and both times, it didn’t turn out so well, I needed more than just words to make a commitment to this man.

He sat back and studied me. I could see different emotions play over his face. There was anger, there was hurt, and finally I thought I saw understanding. I couldn’t just take his passionate promises at face value, could I? After all, guys will promise almost anything when they want a woman.

He stared at me for several minutes until I averted my gaze. I stood up and walked to the balcony he just vacated, leaned on the railing and stared at the bustling city of Lagos. Thousands of people went about their daily businesses, living and loving, that is the whole meaning of life after all. Here I am, trying to live and love too; and the cycle just continues.

I felt Daniel beside me before I saw him. I didn’t turn to him though. I couldn’t look in his face, I know looking at him would only weaken my resolve, and then where would I be?

“This is some view you have here.”

“Yes, it is, and I worked so hard for it.” He touched my arm and turned me to face him. “Ella, I’m very tenacious and I always go for what I want. I want you in my life, and I can tell you I’ve never worked this hard to get a woman. But that’s the issue with you, isn’t it? You’re not just any woman. From the moment I met you, I knew you were the one for me, despite your tardiness and snippy attitude.” He smiled at that.

“I can only promise you I’ll work hard to make this relationship work, but then you have to be willing to work for it too. I’m not going to allow you bail on me when the going gets tough.”

That got my back up. “I don’t bail for the sake of bailing, Daniel.” I snapped.

He just kept looking at me. Finally he smiled. “I’m sure you came to that conclusion a long time ago.”

“Oh, you’re right.” I threw my hands up in surrender. “I know I tend to run when the going gets tough, but I’ve grown a lot recently, and I’ve been able to work on my shortcomings.”

“Ella, I’m not looking for a perfect woman, far from it. I know you’re not perfect and neither am I. This will only work if we both decide to give our very best and work hard to keep us together. I’m ready to go ahead if you are.”

I shrugged. “I’m still scared.”

“That is the risk you have to take babe. I’m taking a risk here too. I will never know if you’ll wake up tomorrow, decide I’m too much to handle and leave me high and dry with a broken heart; but darling, I love you enough to try.” He hooked a hand at the back of my neck and used it to draw me closer to him. He gave me a soft kiss on the lips.

I sighed. “You dived into my heart so suddenly Daniel. I wish I saw it coming, I would have guided my heart against you.”

“Haven’t you heard? I’m a bulldozer.”

I laughed. He could always make me laugh. “Yeah right. It was Boyd that really convinced me. That sexy car is a real deal binder.”

“We aim to please, ma’am.” He gave a mock bow, straightened and opened his arms to me.

I walked into his arms eagerly, knowing it was way more than just hugging, that was me trusting him with my heart, hoping he would keep it safe, and that was me willing to take his heart, praying I will hold it dear, and it was also both of us trusting each other with our priciest possession, willing to explore happiness together.

“I love you.” He whispered in my ears.

“I love you.” I whispered back, closed my eyes and said a silent prayer, praying that this time, it would work.




P.S: I want to make our next story readers’ choice. Do you have any idea for a story? Do you have any story you’ll like me to write on? Please leave a comment in the comment box and I’ll read them and choose the one I’ll work on. You have to convince me to choose your idea though (lol), so make it good. Get commenting and convincing guys! We have to choose a winner on Sunday.

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  1. // Reply

    This is excellent and well written- couldn’t have asked for a better story

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      Thank you dear. I’m glad you stayed till the end Adachukwu. Please check out the bookstore for other exciting stories. Safe payment gateway is assured. Cheers…xo

  2. // Reply

    Well done Maggie. It was nice.

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    Wow! That was a story well written

    Erm , so we get to pick the title for u out next story?

    … Love saw us through?
    … We came through?
    … Love found us?
    How about those? I hope they are good, sure they can’t match your dope title…

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      Hi Adenyke. Thanks for the compliment. However, the title picking time is over. A new story will be published tomorrow titled ‘Love beyond Reason’. Stay tuned for it!

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